Martin's making new friends so quickly
Better watch your mouth, shorty!
Here he meets Russel, or as they call him, "Ironhead". He's a mutt with some serious hearing problems
PS: I'm not happy with the dialogues and flow on this page. If you guys have any ideas to share, I'll be glad to hear them!
Btw, I'm changing the font's size. I think it's less aggressive to the reader if it is a bit smaller!
You guys let me know what you think about that! ^^
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Thank you for all the comments and faves!
so much personality in one sentence XDDD
Hoho I wonder who spoke! Can't wait for more
I might me wrong tho. ^^
I LOVE YOUR ART, COMIC, STORIES AND MANY OTHER THINGS
AND I KNEW I SAW STEBAN ON THE LAST PAGE
One less reason to get totally beat up ^_^' I tried
Yes Steban we can all see you no need to hide.
Uh-oh, how's he gonna get out of this?
a hint someone gave me for my own comics once: play more with perspective in each panel - you have a lot of character close ups in there - there is no real variation in the scenes, it's just packed with characters. try to change perspective more often
for example you could change the 5th panel to a view from above - so you can see the other dog jumping of the chair - would also add some dynamic (i guess that's what's also missing - some movement that creates dynamic - the chair might as well get kicked over, because the fellow is pretty angry, right? ).
in the second panel you could also change the perspective slightly - martin is a lot smaller than the other fellow, so it would be nice to see the other dog from martin's perspective (from a lower perspective looking up - the other dog would be see in profile, his eye glancing down).
when it comes to dialogues ... in the 6th panel martin should probably stutter a bit
well, but that's just my opinion how the flow could be better ^^ (oh and i hope it's clear what i tried to explain )
thank you so much for all the tips!! I'll certainly follow them, once I intend to improve this page in the future! ^^
but nevertheless i really like your style of drawing
Could you please let me know if it sounds a bit better?
What a drunk.
Could you let me know if it sounds like the "right" kind of harsh now?
I didn't want Martin to be as insulting as he sounded, only a bit
Oh hey, pardon me if I was being a little forthright in my criticism. Yes it is much improved. And I'm so far really enjoying this comic. I couldn't do anything like it.
Mind if I ask how you got so good at expressions?
so thank you!!
I'm super glad to hear it sounds better now!
And thank you so much for that as well! I'm happy to hear you like the way I draw expressions!
This might sound funny, but when I was younger, I used to like sitting in front of a mirror making funny faces. That might have helped me quite a bit!
Other than that, watching cartoons and observing how people react to certain situations is always helpful as well! ^^